"The next day Aisha and I gingerly make our way to school as if we're afraid that any minute now someone is going to tap us on the elbows and firmly lead us away."
This sentence was one that i really liked because it kinda described the chapter. they were scared. Really scared. But even though they were scared they still went to school and lived their lives. They even tried to fight and get their parents out of the mess. They came together even after a big fight with gravy involved and tried to work together to take care of their family. I think even though they get in alot of fights and Aisha is perfect and treats Nadira like crap, they still would come together to help their family and thats how much they care.
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Great Diablog Kalli!
ReplyDeleteYou chose a great quote, I was going to choose that one as well, but then I decided against it.
You did a good job of describing what happened in the chapter, and voice your opinion vividly.
I suggest:
*looking at you're punctuation
*Voicing your opinion more.
Kalli,
You did a great job with this. Next time have more fun with it and voice your opinion, don't just describe the chapter.
:D,
Celeste